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earthman buck
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earthman buck
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01/05/2007 6:30 pm
The other night I stayed up until 2:30 trying to come up with decent words for this music I had figured out. It turned out pretty awful, so I re-wrote it entirely in about 15 minutes before band practice. We played the song and it didn't turn out very well, but I still think the lyrics are alright. I might edit them a bit, but first I want to see what you think.

Yeah we're better off alone
we can stand just fine alone
when put to the test, the best
tend to resemble stone

Take a stab with what you've got
make your move or be forgot
if you always bet to win, all in
you might get what you want
And you call it a life?

Why don't you kick off, and leave me be
I'll find a new way to motivate my needs
so take a step back and validate me please

Mobilizing every day
synthesizing DNA
you can throw out every week, and speak
without a thing to say

Take a stab with what you've got
make your move or be forgot
when you're living to be whipped, beat
you might get what you want
And you call it a life?

Why don't you kick off, and leave me be
I'll find a new way to motivate my needs
so take a step back and validate me please